Hi HarmanYour writing was good because you described the problem and the resolution. I think that the noise was coming from the waves crashing against the rock. Maybe next time you can add more describing words to your story.
Hi Harman
ReplyDeleteYour writing was good because you described the problem and the resolution. I think that the noise was coming from the waves crashing against the rock. Maybe next time you can add more describing words to your story.